This is way too crowded, too much information on both sides of the card, I think a business card should be simplistic in order to get the information across. I like the stripes but not for the business card, the name should speak for itself.
I want to keep everything portrait including all menus etc, just so that everything is vertical in order to represent the idea of stripes.
I've tried out this design where the text is in vertical lines too but I think this could be read landscape so I maybe need something on the bottom of it which you read normally to make sure it is seen as portrait.
I've included the line 'gentlemen only' to give some indication that this is an exclusive place for men only.
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