Final Crit

Feedback

Points from the crit:
stripe should be consistent on all menus inside
finish the invite-put info on the back
Details about the restaurant should go on the business card
Propose the app asap

Progress crit

Key points from the crit:

• Rethink leading/kerning
• do posters need stripes?
• menu covers- the type of menu needs to be bigger
• how could I fold the invitation

The crit was really helpful getting outsiders opinions on my work as I wasn't aware some of the provers were illegible so I have revisited them and made some alterations as well as other points made.

Final crit

Key things from the crit:

• Text is too small on Dead Man's Shoes ident, also need to be moved to white space so more legible.
• Need to experiment more with packaging ideas
• Sounds on ident could be individual to films
• Move star rating to same place as quote on all idents
• Dead Man's Shoes fence draws slow in places can this be sped up?
• Contradicting views, one pair liked the idents without the flag the other said they preffered them with.

Progress crit

Key things from the crit:

• explain more on design context blog
• need to start looking at 50sec title sequence
• experiment with overlaying things 
• flag looks too photoshopped, make it more realistic
• adding just tiny sneaks of colour now and then might look good
• look at type used in the actual films
• speed of drawings
• experiment with colour 
• research into audio

Design Direction crit

After laying out our presentation words, our work was critically evaluated by another pair. I found the crit extremely beneficial and productive and I liked the fact that our work had to speak for itself in order for people to understand and give feedback.

My feedback poins out some really good/ helpful points and I now know what decisions I have to make and how to move forward. I need to finialise my media, if I'm going to collage photos with drawings or if the photos won't work, I need to define my audience with regards to age rather than just interest and ensure I keep consistency within all animations.

One point which was made was to keep the typeface very simplistic to add clarity and understanding on screen, this is something I had considered with the Arial Black but I need to explore other options.

I made this quick action plan afterwards in order to take things further and do what I need to do.